Personal Narrative

 Anecdote in Punta Cana

Firstly 6 years ago on vacation we went to Punta Cana, when we go to the hotel that was very spacios had a very big TV, there was a small refrigerator where there were different drinks and a pantry full of snacks. Also near to the hotel was the buffet, the food was diverse when we went te eat there, there were many things that we would choose there were so many things that I don´t know to take.

Secondly, in the following days we went to look at the animals like the sea lion, it has a color dark and had somo like hairs and it smell ugly, we also saw that they did many tricks and also gave kisses to the people. There were also parrots that cycled for a thread, they also had shopping cars that were so small and cute.

Thirdly, there was a day were we go to the sea, thye water was very crystalline and the sand was very white and clean, then we went to an area where there were dolphins that did tricks and gave us kisses, we also gave them food like fish.

Finally, I like this trip to Punta Cana because I can saw different animals and and very diverse food, also I enjoy a lot and take me many beautiful and special memories, and I also had fun and crazy moments with the animals. And I smell a very wild and peculiar when I was there.   

Comments

  1. Jany RoseroMay 14, 2021 at 5:40 AM

    Hello Michelle, I imagine how beautiful your experience was. I have heard that Punta Cana is a lovely place, I would like to visit it in the near future.
    You're right, the buffets are great, there is usually so much food and so delicious that you don't know which one to choose.
    I find your experience with sea lions and dolphins fantastic because they are lovely animals.

    I think your blog is good, you used sequence connectors that allow you to show the correct order of your story. I can advise you that, for the next time, you could put more details about your experience, to make it a little more extensive and put more images, for example, of the buffet and the animals you saw. Finally, do not forget that, when we talk about something that has already happened, all verbs must be in the past. Good job!

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  2. mathias herediaMay 14, 2021 at 11:33 AM

    it really looked super interesting about the dolphins they are super cute and great that snack machine layers and took me all jajaj but super entertaining and should be super nice place

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  3. nicolas aguilarMay 15, 2021 at 6:36 PM

    I really enjoy it was really fantastic and amazing place when you go to take your vacations also I think that it was really cool when you go to visit the dolphines and the fantastic lion I think that punta cana is a fantastic place to go and have fun with family and also friends.

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